The B.A.R Strategy
B - Better
B - Better
A - Add
R - Remove/Replace
Student suggestions included a few of the following,
We could make a story better by:
using different settings i.e a city, a bridge or a swamp instead of the forest,
by including a moral into the story like fables do,
or changing the scary elements
and characters featured in the story so people don't get eaten!
We could add something by:
creating a new scene,
incorporating a different character into the story
(or by adding extra details),
like Red Riding Hood walking through the forest
with a friend and not by herself.
We could remove or replace something by:
using different adjectives or nouns within the text,
removing Red Riding Hoods cape and giving her a name instead.
Or swapping the big bad wolf for a stranger in the woods!
(and include a new protagonist later on)
Or removing the wood cutter and replacing him with her Dad.
(A new hero - My Grade Ones loved this idea!)
Drawing upon a rich fabric of ideas assists students to write creatively and imaginatively.